This is a pool I went 3-0-1 with at a sealed event. The draw was intentional.
I think this is was the strongest pool I've literally ever seen and will ever see. If you have improvements to this or a variation on it, then I'd like to see it, but I really liked it and the deck worked flawlessly. I can't deny there was an element of luck but this was hitting on all cylinders. Turn 1 Hopeful Eidolon to Turn 2 ordeal was devastating, as was the devotion to red for Purphoros and Fnatic. Without early removal, the deck did very well.
Obviously, it had a few problems when it got later in the game, but the idea was to win early by being aggressive and deal with threats by tapping blockers to get the game over with asap.