Emzed says... #1

You need more lands, 30 is not enough. I know it's unexciting, but I'd cut a minimum of 5 spells from your list for lands. They can be lands with utility like Tranquil Thicket, Llanowar Reborn or Ghost Quarter to prevent flooding out.
Also I'm surprised not to see EDH staples such as Sol Ring and Command Tower in your list. Is there a specific reason for their absence?

June 3, 2020 4:44 p.m.

MapPsycho says... #2

@Emzed

Thank you for those suggestions! Are there any cards in particular you would suggest cutting? Be brutally honest please. As for the others, I need to get a Sol Ring and I also don't own a Command Tower. I'll grab that too. Thank you!

June 3, 2020 6:14 p.m. Edited.

MapPsycho says... #3

@Emzed Just bought those three lands you suggested, as well as Command Tower and Sol Ring!

June 3, 2020 6:27 p.m.