I think Sorin, Solemn Visitor has a place in this. Tokens+Everything has lifelink=Win. And the ult is pretty scary too.

Having Brimaz, King of Oreskos and Hero of Bladehold together is pretty redundant so I'd say to keep one of them. Glory of Warfare is interesting so if it works for you then go for it. Captain of the Watch is also pretty interesting. Not sure about it since it's a pretty high CMC. Elspeth, Sun's Champion costs the same but is a lot better and has a higher impact. Sorin, Solemn Visitor could probably be replaced by something better (likely another Elspeth). Legion Loyalist isn't that great in the deck since he's super small and if you're going to focus on a token deck then cards that just get out more stuff would be better than him (something like Young Pyromancer but you don't have many triggers so it probably wouldn't be too good). I'm not so sure about Goblin Rabblemaster either since there aren't really that many goblins. Lastly, if you're going to run Dark Confidant then have either a lot more spells that can protect him (more Lightning Bolt s, Lightning Helix , etc.). Otherwise stuff like Phyrexian Arena , Sign in Blood , and Night's Whisper are better.