Do you have Suicidal Charge?

They're single-target, but Blood Lust and Berserk can be good removal in a goad deck.

Grand Melee forces attacks and blocks.

If you take the guidelines as rules, Ruination is too much land denial for Bracket 3. From the Ashes is probably okay, since it allows players to replace their land, but that's a judgement call. Blood Moon also counts as mass land denial, if that's a concern.

Most of the Zendikar vampires fit. How about Drana, Kalastria Bloodchief, Guul Draz Overseer, Ruthless Cullblade, and Vampire Hexmage?

I think you hit your intended theme perfectly. But the site recommendations aren't perfect. A deck can be both powerful and built to a theme, and the bracket system can capture both. Not trying to attack your concept at all, just explaining why I think the site recommendation isn't capturing the whole picture. Bracket 1 is theme at the expense of power and reliability. This deck has a theme that serves reinforces its power and reliability. It's very strong even for Bracket 2, and I think it would easily fall into Bracket 3, even without game changers or instant-win combos.

It's a solid deck with a great theme. Despite what the site recommends, it's not Bracket 1.

I don't see why you would be unable to respond to the Drop of Honey trigger to use Sorceress Queen as intended. SQueen's ability doesn't have any timing restrictions, and Drop isn't a targeted effect, so you don't have to choose the creature to destroy until it resolves. (This second part might be where I'm wrong; if it is, could I please get an explanation?)

Quick reference, Porphyry Nodes has updated rules text that's exactly the same as Drop of Honey's.

Weland's Forge

Artifact Enchantment Creature Land - Construct

Weland's Forge enters tapped.

: Add .

, : Add or .

, : Put a +1/+1 counter on another target artifact creature you control.

Constellation - Whenever Weland's Forge or another enchantment you control enters, Weland's Forge gets +1/+1 and gains first strike and lifelink until end of turn.

0/1

Create a card that turns your hand into a poker hand.

Your Fire, Walk With Me looks really good! I'm not an expert in mono-red, but it has everything I would suggest, and it's a good representative for pEDH.

I've seen The Great Henge do interesting/horrifying things with Yarok, the Desecrated. It's good utility in general, and can get ridiculous in a dedicated combo. If you have one or you're willing to buy/trade another $50+ card for this deck, I recommend it.

yeaGO The cloudflare notifications have stopped, so thank you for that (assuming everything is still secure). It was showing up literally every time a page loaded for a couple of days.

Echomaster Yup, the DFC issue is a known bug.

Going back to another card I made a couple of pages ago.

Syr Gare, Master of Games

Legendary Planeswalker - Gare

Whenever you roll a die or flip a coin, put a loyalty counter on Gare.

0 Each player rolls a six-sided die. Each player who rolled the highest creates two Treasure tokens. For each player who rolled the lowest, Gare deals 3 damage to up to one target creature of that player's choice.

0 Play Rock-Paper-Scissors with another player. The winner discards any number of cards, then draws that many cards.

-4 Flip a coin. If you win the flip, gain control of target permanent until end of turn. It gains haste. If you lose the flip, target opponent gains control of target permanent you control of their choice until your next untap step.

5

Create an important building, statue, or other landmark from New Capenna.