Hate to be that guy, but you realize that you can't actually cast any of the red spells in this list, since your commander is mono-black?

Ahh, shit. That was the first plan, I forgot to swap it it Olivia. Thanks for the headsup

To go further on what Aragnor said, you can't even have any of the cards with red in them or Mountains in this deck since the commander is mono-black. As long as you switch to a commander, you can leave the rest of it as is.

Yeah I know, it wasn't intentional, Ive corrected it. The original plan was mono black, then added red but forgot to change the General out

Bump in the Night seems really bad, but other than that I like it.

Maybe replace it with a good way to clear the board, like Hex, or Black Sun's Zenith

Bloodflow Connoisseur , Rockslide Elemental , Sorin Markov, Vampire Nighthawk, Bloodghast are my suggestions. Looks cool though!

Ha wow, Hex is awesome! -and under a dollar, that's deff worth dropping Bump for... my only question is would it have to be six creatures? rather if my opponent and I each had three out, would it make me target my own creatures too? (probably a noob question, sorry lol) . . .
Paul: I totally had Vamp Nighthawk in there, no idea how it disappeared!I did a color swap when I put the list together, Im guessing it went accidently during that, thanks for the headsup! I just snagged a copy of Bloodghast for the Golgari EDH deck I reccently completed, hes a boss, I deff want another for this. I think Sorin is making the next order along with it, that would be a real snug fit here, haha . . .
Thanks for the recommendations, guys!

Yes, you must target exactly six creatures with Hex for it to go on the stack.

okay, cool. I assumed it would be, but had to ask. Thanks!

Although you must target 6 creatures, it doesn't matter if some of them die before the spell resolves. The rest still get destroyed.

Lightning Greaves > Swiftfoot Boots

That picture is disturbing Nice, fun deck tho.