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Homelessguy on Seeking proofreader for my first ...

3 weeks ago

So I recently just made my first primer sitting in a waiting room and decided to Prime up one of my decks to kill time.

Well this is the first one I've ever done and I was hoping somebody could read it and tell me if it's understandable.

So I'm just looking for someone do read over it and let me know what I can do better or what I could take out as I'm afraid and some parts it's a little long-winded!

Thanks in advance for anybody willing to take a look.


Parlay girl [[ primer ]]

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