The Rival

If the moon smiled, she would resemble you.

You leave the same impression

Of something beautiful, but annihilating.

Both of you are great light borrowers.

Her O-mouth grieves at the world; yours is

unaffected,

And your first gift is making stone out of

everything.

I wake to a mausoleum; you are here,

Ticking your fingers on the marble table, looking

for cigarettes,

Spiteful as a woman, but not so nervous,

And dying to say something unanswerable.

The moon, too, abuses her subjects,

But in the daytime she is ridiculous.

Your dissatisfactions, on the other hand,

Arrive through the mailslot with loving regularity,

White and blank, expansive as carbon

monoxide.

No day is safe from news of you,

Walking about in Africa maybe, but thinking of

me.

Looks like a pretty good deck! +1 (would +1 again because of Zendikar lands :D Fuck you Unhinged! :3)

Tasigur?

You need to add the soup bowl islands instead. All hail Vincent Pross!!!

i have the same deck but i cut the dissipates in favor of +1 lily +1 koira + crux of fate

I actually have the "bowls" I just didn't specity on the decklist lol

Mind if I ask why Tasigur, the Golden Fang is not in here and Torrent Elemental is? Yes Torrent Elemental is harder to remove essentially unable, but Tasigur is just better and the elemental tapping down creatures isn't doing anything.

Ashiok and Whelming Wave are a must if there are any serious Jund players around where you live. Otherwise the only thing i'd do is maybe move Drown in Sorrow to mainboard.