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It's not enough.
You have a lot of high CC stuff, not enough interaction to last that long and chumps that won't stop anything.
You have a good idea but you start going in different directions.
I'd play removal and discard (discard that also affects you like Thoughtseize, Collective Brutality along with your cycling cards for draws, drain life. Then, curve out some creatures that help the cause.