The first thing I see when looking at this deck is consistency, where is it! You need a lot more consistency with an evolve deck. Ive been messing with the evolve mechanic for a while and the one thing that hinders it is your creatures have to evolve in the perfect order, you need to make it as consistent as possible. Id work on figuring out what to take out so you can have more 4 of and 3 of in your deck. All tournament level decks usually only have 11 to 13 different cards in the deck... you have 19. Thats a HUGE difference in consistency of a deck. If you want help with what to pull out I can help but Ill leave it up to you first to see what you come up with.