Tried this one out for a few rounds tonight, a couple 4 player gamess and a 1v1. It definitely does things, but it felt a bit durdly. I would take out some of the single use blink effects, and trade out some of the ramp that's more reliant on other players ramping faster than you for more rocks. I know it's up to chance, but every game I played inevitably had skullclamp and anthem effects at the same time which is a big feels bad. The other big issue I had could also be up to chance, but I needed to mulligan a ton with this one with how many 6s and 7s are being played, finding a hand with a couple land, a sister, and something to do before turn 7 took inordinately long every match I played it.

I'm also really looking forward to slinging Panharmonimom, I bet some adjustments could bring this up to a really awesome level.

Hi ChillDwarf

I really appreciate your comment. It helps me a lot!

To be honest, I never played this deck yet because I dont have an Elesh Norn, Mother of Machines yet.

I will try the next days to fix it a bit. Maybe I cut the Smothering Tithe and Smuggler's Share for 2 rocks. Some high cmc have to be cut aswell, I think i take out Sun Titan and Admonition Angel.

I get the durdly-point. Do you have any ideas how to fix that? WinCons in mono white is mostly tokens with anthems. I dont want any infinite combos..

Basshunter I wouldn't want to rebuild your whole deck for you, especially not knowing which cards are your pet favorites etc, but here are some things I would make sure to include, and choose as you please what to remove imho:

6-8 artifact ramp cards that cost 3 or less mana, like fellwar stone, commander sphere, coalition relic, mind stone etc

As far as what to take out, Smothering Tithe is an amazing card, especially in an opening hand, I wouldn't get rid of it, but some of the other cards in your ramp suite are a little questionable imho, namely knight of the white orchid, archaeomancer's map, even deep gnome terramancer is a little niche imho. To say it plainly, I'd play Land Tax as the only Land Tax effect.

No more than 6-8 win condition bombs, coming down from about 10-12 as it stands now. To simplify a lot, a win con is a win con, just play your favorite 6-8 and you'll do fine.

Some cards I was surprised you didn't include already:

-Solemn Simulacrum

-Restoration Angel

-Blade Splicer

-Emeria, the Sky Ruin

Some of the cards I think are lower performing:

-Cloudshift (single use flickers dont do enough for the card slot imho)

-Flicker of Fate (^)

-Priest of Ancient Lore (too thicc, play another 1 or 2 drop that ETB draws a card if needed)

-Slaughter the Strong (4 power is a lot of combo pieces enemies can keep, not as effective a wrath as it seems)

I hope I'm not being too overbearing, I was really excited to pilot your idea, and I think it has potential!

After a quick search, I think Banishing Light is an important include, and Settle the Wreckage might be the best replacement for Slaughter the Strong. Cheers!

You are right about the Knight of the White Orchid, but I stay with Archaeomancer's Map. Even if it doesnt ramp for me, it will draw me 2-4 plains.

Solemn Simulacrum I somehow dont like this card. Land is tapped, 4 cmc is pretty high. Maybe i should give it a try in here.

Restoration Angel flickers non-angels. We run a lot of Angels...

Blade Splicer I will include it. Like the 3cmc

Emeria, The Sky Ruin is pretty ecpensive and Im not owning one atm. 100% in when I bought one.

Slaughter the Strong I love this card for 3cmc. Keeps Elesh alive

Thanks for some ideas, I will include those the next days when I got some time =)

Want to include Cleric Class aswell here, lot of options for a 1 drop...

Re: restoration angel, you're only playing 7 angels with etb triggers, and imho, some of them are the cards I would be cutting from the list of win-cons, whereas you have 12 non-angel creatures with etb triggers, which would go up to 14 with blade splicer and solemn sim added, presumably removing a couple of the redundant endgame angels making the ratio even better. It's really strong with panharmonicon effect, I would lean into it.

I like Cleric class, good call

hi ChillDwarf, made the update, I will gametest it tomorrow for the first time...lets see what it does in action...

Looks a lot better to me, I'll give it a try next session with my pals and let you know how it goes!