Seeking proofreader for my first primer
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Posted on June 25, 2018, 9:17 p.m. by Homelessguy
So I recently just made my first primer sitting in a waiting room and decided to Prime up one of my decks to kill time.
Well this is the first one I've ever done and I was hoping somebody could read it and tell me if it's understandable.
So I'm just looking for someone do read over it and let me know what I can do better or what I could take out as I'm afraid and some parts it's a little long-winded!
Thanks in advance for anybody willing to take a look.
Parlay girl [[ primer ]]
Commander / EDH
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I've spent a bit of time writing and re-writing my Saffi Primer, so I am happy to have a look and chip in my two cents.
As a side note, your primary combo with Seeker of Skybreak + Illusionist's Bracers + Selvala, Explorer Returned also works with Green Sun's Zenith. Because GSZ has to find a particular card type, yo ucan fail to find the search but still re-shuffle it over and over (with it being the only card in your library) while your opponents draw out. Just an FYI.
June 26, 2018 1:49 a.m.
Homelessguy says... #5
thank,I had no idea!
That so dope,I'll be adding that it the primer Asap!
landofMordor says... #2
I’ve got you covered, friend! I have a perverse love for proofreading (I guess I never recovered from middle school) and like writing about Magic especially. I’ll take a look ASAP tomorrow and get back with feedback.
June 25, 2018 10:02 p.m.