Gwendolyn Goldweiss, Angelic Ascendant

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Posted on Aug. 18, 2018, 8:53 a.m. by DemonDragonJ

This game now has two fiendish planeswalkers (Tibalt and Ob-Nixilis), so I feel that is should also have an angelic planeswalker. Obviously, a story is needed to explain how such a beign could exist, so I have written one, as seen, below:

Gwendolyn Goldweiss's story Show

I know that Gwendolyn's story is not particularly imaginative or original, but I was not putting my best effort into it; I merely wished for there to be a story that would explain how there could be an angelic planeswalker, and I decided that having an existing planeswalker transfer their spark to an existing angel would be too similar to Venser giving his spark to Karn; the idea of a mortal transcending their existence when their planeswalker spark ignited was much more interesting and imaginative.

Now, for the actual card of Gwendolyn Goldweiss:

Gwendolyn Goldweiss, angelic ascendant Show

For Gwendolyn's first ability, I ensured that it cannot protect planeswalkers, because a player could simply use that ability indefinitely while building their forces. This way, the player is forced to use resources to protect Gwendolyn while she protects the player and their creatures.

For Gwendolyn's second ability, I added the clause that restricts the number of creatures that she can summon when she first enters the battlefield to prevent a player from spending six mana and then immediately summoning five 4/4 creatures with flying.

For Gwendolyn's final ability, I originally had it written so that the emblem prevent a player from losing the game at all as long as they controlled an angel, but that made it too similar to Platinum Angel, which I feel is an overpowered card that should never have been printed, originally. Given that losing life is by far the most common manner through which players lose the game, I feel that the current version of the emblem is very good as it is.

What does everyone else say about this card? How is it?

enpc says... #2

So play her, tick her up once and then -6 for 24 flying damage. Seems broken. You'd be much better off just having it a fixed -3 or something for a single 4/4 flyer. Seems much more balanced. Then you could drop her CMC to 5.

August 18, 2018 10:54 a.m.

Caerwyn says... #3

I second enpc's suggestion, though I disagree in the reasoning. On its face, -6 for 24 flying damage is very powerful, but not that much different than Sarkhan Vol's -6 for 20 flying damage or Sarkhan, Fireblood's -7 for 20 flying damage.

My issue is the flexibility. Because it's a -X ability, rather than a fixed -6 ability, you can activate it earlier, and only use what you need in the given moment.

For cost, -2 seems like a fair price for a 4/4 flyer. I looked at a couple planeswalkers for guidance - Sarkhan Unbroken gives a 4/4 flyer at -2; Ob Nixilis of the Black Oath gives a 5/5 flyer for -2 with some additional pain. Sorin, Solemn Visitor's 2/2 flyer, but Sorin only costs 4 to cast.

Agree completely on CMC being 5 - that seems in line with other Planeswalkers.

August 18, 2018 12:13 p.m.

DemonDragonJ says... #4

It definitively seems that Gwendolyn's middle ability is too powerful, so I shall alter that; I modeled it after Decree of Justice, but that card requires mana, so making a version that does not require mana is definitely too powerful.

Does anyone have any advice on how I can make her first ability more balanced and less overpowered?

August 18, 2018 10:17 p.m.

enpc says... #5

+Something: choose a colur. Up to one target creature gains protection from the chosen colour until end of turn.

Something like that.

August 19, 2018 4:27 a.m.

TreeCat says... #6

This is only slightly related but why do you think Platinum Angel never should have been printed?

August 19, 2018 4:17 p.m.

DemonDragonJ says... #7

TreeCat, I think that that card should never have been printed because its abilities are unconditional and absolute; if there were conditions on its abilities, it would have been fair, but, as it currently, is, it ridiculously overpowered and unfair. If a player cannot deal with it, they have no hope of winning the game.

Also, the fact that it is not legendary also contributes to it being overpowered, as player can copy it with something a such as Progenitor Mimic, and their opponents shall need to destroy every copy if they wish to have a chance of winning.

August 19, 2018 9:03 p.m.

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