Recomendations to write a primer
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Posted on Nov. 26, 2018, 11:33 a.m. by Alexev
I red this great artice How to write a primer
As I finish reding it I start updating my two main decks for commande in order make them more appealing to the readers and cover the information needed.
So I ended up eith this two:
Oloro Durdle
Ignore me, I am just sitting here
Commander / EDH
SCORE: 1 | 1 COMMENT | 45 VIEWS
Vampire aggro super fast
All your blood are belong to us
Commander / EDH*
SCORE: 2 | 8 COMMENTS | 243 VIEWS
I would love if you can take a look at the sections headers (just a peack, dont need to read the content unless it is intresting to you) and advise me if some section is missing of it is too short, or too long.
Just a reminder, they may be some typos or gramatical/ortographic mistakes, I am not a native english speaker
Thanks in advance
landofMordor says... #2
One way to improve grammatical errors would be to use a word-processing software like Google Docs or MS Word, and run them through spellcheck before copy/pasting them into TappedOut. It also looks like your grammar is nearly perfect -- it would be nearly indistinguishable from a native speaker's, but you've got a lot of typos (missing/wrong letters), so maybe just typing slowly on a keyboard instead of a phone would help?
Either way, though, I feel your pain with the dumb rules of English! (My second language is about at the kindergarten level, so you're light-years ahead of me!)
The primers themselves have all the right info! Excellent starting point for those two commanders; well done!
November 26, 2018 1:09 p.m.