Can't use white, it's not a color in your general's color identity.
... but it looks like you fixed that as I was writing this comment. Nevermind!
Word. I'll come back and take a look at it more in a bit. Also I have a golgari reanimator edh deck that you may want to look at. It's not the same, obviously, but you may still get some ideas from it. Good luck!
I think The Mimeoplasm would be a better reanimator general than Damia.
What's your budget?
Budget hasn't been decided, don't want to go too crazy with this one. I had considered The Mimeoplasm as the general, could always just switch the two I guess..
You have a lot of ETB tapped lands. You should try to avoid using so many because they'll slow you down.
Do you have an approximate value per card you're willing to spend?