As a razelfark correctly pointed The Locust God was a too rare guy in the deck and Hollow One missed some certain level of discard or cycle. Keeping the deck at low 60 card level I decided to get rid of Hollow One and Crash Through, add more lands and another copy of The Locust God.
Deck is still in progress and requires more testing gameplay.
Interesting idea you have going here, but I am not to sure on the inclusion of Hollow One as you don't have many cycling cards (and he is mediocre overall without them).
You may want to include 1-2 more copies of The Locust God. He is a strong card you seem to be focusing around, you are going to want to make sure you draw a copy.
I would lastly suggest going to at least 20 lands, but would think your deck would likely run optimally at 24.
Best of luck with the deck.