I like it, Throw in a predatory rampage and side some oblivion rings and It looks good
Token decks are meant to be cheap, drop Rancor for parallel lives. Drop bonesplinters and farseek, add in oblivion rings and midnight hauntings.
A killer card is entreat the angels. It's a must have. Don't know why you need the birds. Everything is cheap, I'd put in champion of the parish instead. Check out my deck it does very well deck:angelic-tokens-65-22