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So I started playing Magic about two weeks ago when New Phyrexia came out. This deck is basically a Golem deck with a few other token things and a little splash of metalcraft.
*Please note that I want to keep this standard. Also, I'm avoiding buying anything prior to the Mirrodin block, so please try to keep this in mind when making card suggestions.
Pretty cool man, my suggestion would be that you streamline it a little bit. What i mean is try to cut out a bit of the variety and get some playsets going (4x one card).
You want to pick a basic strategy for the deck and take out anything that doesn't fit with that strategy.
For example if you want the deck to be a golem deck, you gotta put way more golems in and take out some of the fluff. Maybe try Rusted Relic if you are going to have a lot of artifacts. If that is the case i would have 4x Dispatch as well.The Precursor Golem hurts you, because if any golem you control gets targeted they all get nailed.
It's a good start though man, just trim away some of the fat! good luck.