You're running Brainstorm without many ways to shuffle your deck, that seems really bad.

You are right! Changed it for Ponder

In my opinion, Mox Diamond is better than Chrome Mox because you only need to discard a land, as opposed to exiling a spell.

Yeah, but it also is on the expensive side :(

Changed Apprentice Wizard for Master of Waves

you're not going to run the Sage of Fables + Glen Elendra Archmage combo? Janky to be sure but its pretty brutal and they're both good cards on their own. Not to mention then you can sac Archmage to Voidmage Prodigy for a 2 mana recurable counter.

I would also recommend Misdirection and Isochron Scepter.

Those are great suggestions enpc! What cards you think I should take out?

I come from the world of regular commander, so its a hard call on what is good value in duel, but I would say that you have too many lands, especially for a draw card general. I also don't like the idea of Chrome Mox. I know that its the only ramp in the deck, however as a once off, i think you could happily replace it with a High Tide and get so much more value from it or put a Sapphire Medallion in the deck to get so much more vlaue. I would also look at cutting your lands down to 39/40, 42 seems really high, especially with your curve peaking at 2/3. Also, things like Hapless Researcher are nice, but hes a catch 22 card - you can only use him once unless your don't use him at all until yo ucast your general. Things like that can easily be replaced by cards with the "loot" effect (though its not called that). See Merfolk Looter for an example.

Came in first today at my local FNM! Yei!

Lands you might be interested in are Reliquary Tower and Nykthos, Shrine to Nyx. Unlimited hand size with all this draw is perfect and Nykthos is great since Azami alone gives you enough devotion start using it.

Some changes:

Out:

1x Void Snare

1x Isochron Scepter

1x Hapless Researcher

1x Stern Proctor

1x Cancel

1x Logic Knot

1x Mindbreak Trap

1x Nullify

1x Rewind

1x Thassa's Rebuff

1x Omenspeaker

1x Sage of Epityr

1x Peek

1x Negate

1x Syncopate

In:

1x True-Name Nemesis

1x Spell Snare

1x Rune Snag

1x Thought Courier

1x Force Spike

1x Exclude

1x Patron Wizard

1x Forbid

1x Complicate

1x Condescend

1x Remand

1x Martyr of Frost

1x Wipe Away

1x Snapcaster Mage

1x Commandeer