Any ideas for this Black/White Vamp deck?

Commander / EDH

Broileri

Creature (27)

• 1x Angel of Despair
• 1x Anowon, the Ruin Sage
• 1x Ascendant Evincar
• 1x Blood Artist
• 1x Bloodhusk Ritualist
• 1x Bloodline Keeper  ^Flip
• 1x Bloodline Necromancer
• 1x Bloodlord of Vaasgoth
• 1x Butcher of Malakir
• 1x Captivating Vampire
• 1x Crypt Ghast
• 1x Dark Impostor
• 1x Drana, Kalastria Bloodchief
• 1x Falkenrath Noble
• 1x Guul Draz Assassin
• 1x Kalitas, Bloodchief of Ghet
• 1x Kheru Mind-Eater
• 1x Malakir Bloodwitch
• 1x Noxious Gearhulk
• 1x Patron of the Vein
• 1x Sangromancer
• 1x Skeletal Vampire
• 1x Thief of Blood
• 1x Ulamog, the Infinite Gyre
• 1x Vampire Nighthawk
• 1x Vampire Nocturnus
• 1x Voldaren Pariah  ^Flip

Instant (6)

• 1x Grisly Spectacle
• 1x Mortify
• 1x Return to Dust
• 1x Swords to Plowshares
• 1x Teferi's Protection
• 1x Wretched Confluence

Land (32)

• 1x Bojuka Bog
• 1x Command Tower
• 1x Forsaken Sanctuary
• 1x Kabira Crossroads
• 1x Nomad Outpost
• 1x Opal Palace
• 1x Orzhov Basilica
• 1x Orzhov Guildgate
• 1x Path of Ancestry
• 8x Plains
• 1x Scoured Barrens
• 1x Shimmering Grotto
• 12x Swamp
• 1x Terramorphic Expanse

Artifact (12)

• 1x Akroma's Memorial
• 1x Door of Destinies
• 1x Doubling Cube
• 1x Lightning Greaves
• 1x Mindcrank
• 1x Orzhov Signet
• 1x Sol Ring
• 1x Swiftfoot Boots
• 1x Thran Dynamo
• 1x Trepanation Blade
• 1x Vanquisher's Banner
• 1x Venser's Journal

Planeswalker (2)

• 1x Liliana Vess
• 1x Sorin Markov

Commander (1)

Sorcery (12)

• 1x Blood Tribute
• 1x Consuming Vapors
• 1x Fell the Mighty
• 1x Final Judgment
• 1x Iona's Judgment
• 1x Merciless Eviction
• 1x New Blood
• 1x Phyrexian Rebirth
• 1x Rise from the Grave
• 1x Sever the Bloodline
• 1x Thoughtseize
• 1x Victimize

Enchantment (8)

• 1x Black Market
• 1x Blind Obedience
• 1x Darksteel Mutation
• 1x Grave Pact
• 1x Kindred Boon
• 1x Oversold Cemetery
• 1x Pillory of the Sleepless
• 1x Sanguine Bond

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So this is my first on my own build deck and i'd like some comments. Im hooked to this game and i'd like some advice from the best. The main thing is that could this deck work? And if not, what should i seek for better game. Im a bit lost with the right commander so feel honest with me. And also im i right with manaside or should i switch for smaller creatures?

Date added	6 years
Last updated	6 years
Exclude colors	WB
Legality	This deck is Commander / EDH legal.
Rarity (main - side)	10 - 0 Mythic Rares 36 - 0 Rares 21 - 0 Uncommons 12 - 0 Commons
Cards	100
Avg. CMC	4.19
Tokens	Bat 1/1 B, Phyrexian Horror X/X C, Vampire 2/2 B, Vampire */* B