Consider 4 Time to Feed or Savage Punch instead of Plummet + Naturalize. You should take out some of your 5CMC and 6CMC cards and add some Forest. IMHO you need 24 lands in a deck like this. You could maybe use Setessan Oathsworn. I strongly suggest adding Leafcrown Dryad and/or Swordwise Centaur, the idea being to have a stronger/more consistent early game. If your opponent survives your onslaught of 2 drops and pump spells, then you play Terra Stomper for the win :) Hope that's helpful and not just stupid :D
Why not play Genesis Hydra Instead of See the Unwritten ? Also why not some Hornet Queen and even some Chord of Calling which would allow you to play a little few less Reclamation Sage putting some of then on the board and take out some Garruk's Packleader . Also, why not Setessan Tactics in place of Time to Feed ?
First of: any suggestion I make here is based on Theros Block cards, because it seemed you were going for that. I agree with a couple of things Zoolbar mentioned. Biggest critique is the manabase. If you're running 2 colours, you'll need about 23 lands (even with dual lands this amount is advisable). 18 is just way too inconsistent, especially because there's no ramp or a way to tutor for lands.
I'd say toss out the Hero of Leina Tower (or Lagonna-Band Trailblazer , if you prefer the Leina Tower), you already have 2 playsets of one-drop creatures. Use this space to add lands. Preferably plains, those are lacking most.
Take out Unravel the Aether , for the same reason Zoolbar mentioned. If you want artifact/enchantment removal (in theros-block), put it into the sideboard and use Fade into Antiquity instead. Consider creature removal like Time to Feed or Divine Verdict . Time to Feed also targets your own creature, which will also trigger their heroic ability, so I recommend that one.
Another creature to consider might be the Fabled Hero .
I'll try Nylea to see if I need her to get the damage in.
Thanks for the tip Codeman702 !
Cool idea. I think you should really add more fight cards to make this deck better. Adding 2 more Hunt the Weak and 2 more Time to Feed would compliment this deck nicely. Also, when Khans of Tarkir comes out, Savage Punch would be a nice addition also.
Good points, I took out 1 Hornet Queen for another Polukranos. I only play Ordeal of Nylea 's on my Mistcutter, so as soon as they attack I get the two lands, which is really only what I'm after. I also put Setessan Tactics in the sideboard, replacing Time to Feed . For the same mana I can have 2 of my creatures eating others instead of just one.
Seeing as I run only two Nykthos, Shrine to Nyx , Voyaging Satyr is actually a card that shouldn't be in the deck and will actively refuse to put in the deck. In a position where Boss Sligh can Shock my Voyaging Satyr and have to Mizzium Mortars my Sylvan Caryatid , I think the more clear choice is Sylvan Caryatid because only mass board removal takes care of Caryatid. I get Im only Mono Green but Caryatid is a 0/3 for two mana and it has Hexproof. Compared to the Satyr that's a 1/2 for the same cost but only untaps a land and doest have Hexproof. They cant burn or remove the Caryatid so its more stable. Also seeing as I only run the two shrines the odds of me hitting it are few and far between, most of the time I dont hit the Shrines. Sorry but Sylvan Caryatid is the better choice. I did however change the Time to Feed out of my sideboard for Setessan Tactics .
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